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Grampa and Me
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Looking at this picture, the words practically wrote themselves. Hope you enjoy. :)

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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There is a perfect patch of blue,
a tonsure surrounded by a head
of grey.  The old man chuckles
in a rumble of thunder, 'It will
surely rain, today.'  He mutters
with ozone-sharp breath, 'I hope
you have your um-brrr-el-llllla
with you.'  I giggle and tell him,
'Dear Grampa, it's right beside
me ------ yes, indeed, I do.' 
He puts his great big hand in my
tiny one and we go out into the
wet.  I think to myself, I've got
the bestest Grampa, ain't found
a better one YET.'  
(THE END.)

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (July 14)

 


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 Reviews of "Grampa and Me"
Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
Another nice one, Karla--- Very descriptive! :-)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
Keep him close to your loving memory
where he belongs
and deep in your heart and soul
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Good for you Karla. A wonderful piece you've penned here my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
loved this soo much

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
I did not ever see or talk to one of my grandfathers. The other passed away when I was quite young. I only remember very little of him. Wish I would have had more time to know him and learn from him. Your poem tugs strongly at me. We should honor our grandparents often and lovingly. Thanks. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Grampas are usually very cool!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
A delightful read. I enjoyed this one very much!
Sheila

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
And I can see a little girl holding her Grandpa's hand has they try to hit each little pool of water and make it to splash....

Georg

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
...expressive imagery...you share with wonder and light.
beautiful Karla...
John

Reviewed by Debra Kraft
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Wonderful character piece!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
You write this tales of the weather that make me smile and always make my day

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
This is delightfully sweet; great picture, wonderful thoughts, Karla!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
singing in the rain,,,,:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Love the imagery Karla! You also captured the pic beautifully!...ET

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Great write ad I hope my grandchildren have memories such as this when they grow up. Thank you Karla for another smile.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Love it and reminds me of my own grandchild, in the midst of a birthday party here on Sat for my other grandchild, with ten kids running around she came to me and said she had no one to play with, could I play pirate with her...you can guess the answer. lol
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
You brought a smile to my face with your personification, Karla.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
There is a smile on my face...ed

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
The was just sweet as honey! It misted my eyes and touched my heart!
HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
How sweet and endearing, very expressive of shared love....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
A nice story about your grandpa. A lovely memory, too.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Oh Karla, you are so fortunate to have memories of your precious Grandpa. A beautiful poem that made me smile with misty eyes ... hugs

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Very well said Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
great grandpa Karla, hugs

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Clever word usage and outstanding image, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
This is beautiful Karla
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
wonderful!


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