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Perfectionist, Me (Inspired by Anessa Blaine)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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with a few strokes
of the pen,
you get to the crux
of the matter
while i'm foundering
in 
a sea of
(useless) words ---

damn i wish i
could write like you ---

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (9/19)

 

 


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 Reviews of "Perfectionist, Me (Inspired by Anessa Blaine)"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
everyone has a different style -- without the diversity, poetry would be, boring -- many times most of us have wished we could write like someone else -- but we could not get along without Karla The Storyspinner -- for you too have a unique style all your own -- thank goodness -- you add perspectives and a style that all of us wish at times we could emulate -- just keep being who you are -- we love you -- peace lady -- JMW

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
But then... we wouldn't have Karla...
We love you for who you are and what your write. You have your own style. And I for one am happy about that!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
Poets are like snowflakes, each have beauty in their own right! Each of us are one of a kind and so very special. HUGS! SC

Reviewed on September 20, 2008
Short and Beautiful. Thanks dear sister

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Hey, you're a storm spinner. Ain't a whirl of words what we ought to expect a little of--and you said this so humorously,so thoughtful in only a few--glad you made it through Ike----Jerry

Reviewed on September 19, 2008
I love this, and the Graphic is perfect as well, as I have told you before you have the eye for the shot
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
You write in a very unique style...and that is what is so wonderful about your work... I enjoy it very much, and obviously so do many others!!!!!! lindalaw

Reviewed on September 19, 2008
A wonderful tribute but I like your poetry just as it is.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
I always enjoy your words karla and wouldn't want you to write like anyone other than yourself for you are who I like to read.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
We all write differently and with different methods but does not mean the merits of one writer is better or worst than that of another. You have your own unique style and how each poem arrives at that destination does not matter...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Fantastic pic! Karla you may wish it, but your readers
love the way YOU write, and that's what counts;-)ET

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
You are in my definition...PERFECT, Ed

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
hi Karla,
not to shabby yourself....diffferent strokes... different shades of colors.... as long as your heart and soul are diving it ..it's all good,
stan

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Let's remember practice makes perfect! We're practicing our hearts out!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
But dear Karla...you are!

Georg

Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Karla,

Aspiring to write like another is frustrating. (Been there, done that many times) But you have more talent than anyone I know. It's not necessary to change your style, its beautiful..and it's you.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
You do very well Karla. I enjoy your writes very much. Keep it up girl and God bless. ;-)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
You write like Karla, that's why we come. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
never wish to write like anyone but yourself, you give what is intended to the world.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
I guess a lot of us wish we had Ms Blaine's skill with words.
But, Karla, you should celebrate you...whose writing makes us
laugh, makes us think, makes us a little sad, maybe even gets
our dander up, and it also makes us happy to know you better.
-gene, a fan.


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
You honor her well.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
You write admirably well yourself! I like this one very much. Rebecca

Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Don't worry how others write: you write for YOU, and keep on keepin' on!! GREAT write, and I agree wholeheartedly! BRAVA, very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
I'm with you.

That girl has dreams for blood.
And when she bleeds--
She's visionary.

--Charlie


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