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Black and Blue Friday
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... The news just keeps getting worse, ....

Stormclouds over Wal Mart: my condolences to the family of the employee killed by greed. =[ It shouldn't be like this ...

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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... Black Friday should be called Black and
Blue, because that's what it's become.  The
news just keeps getting worse, reading of a
Wal Mart employee dying due to trampling,
two other grown men acting like spoiled
brats shoot and kill each other in a ToysRUs.

Doesn't count how many legs run into with
shopping carts, how many shoved, or how
many screamed at.  Twin sister and I saw a
fistfight this morning, at our local Wal Mart,
over sheets.  SHEETS!!  (Might be asking,
what were we doing out?  No money until

last night, getting food, some of which was
taken out of our basket:  guess they needed
it more.)  Three years ago: we saw two men
fighting over a boxed TV:  "Mine!"  "No, it's
MINE!!"  No one's, except floor's:  box
broke, TV shattered in the middle.  Holidays

are for Grinches, anymore ... greed taking
over common sense.  Take the first part of
Christmas out and there you have it:  it's no
wonder.  Teach your children, well:  apathy
and gotta-have-it-price-be-damned, instead
of the Real Reason's left me black and blue ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (11/28)


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 Reviews of "Black and Blue Friday"
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
I stayed home during the madness of the Black and Blue Friday, I would rather have my life then lose it over pety things
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
My holiday shopping was done before last week...and I was thrilled to not have to get up and be run over by crazy people.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
Carol Garber has quite ably summed up the situation -- peace and love to you Karla -- JMW

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
Love the on-line shopping and free shipping. Holiday shoppers seem to forget-IT IS JESUS" BIRTHDAY!!!!
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
So very sad Karla when they forget what Christmas is really about. We are talking about adults who are suppose to teach the children about love and respect. This would never happen here in Canada. First sign of trouble and out you go. Of course you are thrown in jail if you're caught with a gun too. Different laws. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Karla,

Truly sad - they're now searching for the ones who trampled that poor man . . . thanks for sharing your thoughts!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
The truth can be so disgusting can't it? Cool label... Black & Blue Friday.... cute... lindalaw

Reviewed on November 29, 2008

A picture of falling society... "Black and Blue Friday" strike the bells of good sense.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
"Vanity of vanities; all is vanity." Self-definition through stuff--and it's hard not to do it in this ad-drivem world--
hugs to you--

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Not too many things shock me anymore but this did. Tragic. Thank you for this write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Buy! Buy! Buy! even if you aren't financial soluble, because we need to give a big push to the economy. Then, why are WE the ones to do it everytime those finance-mavericks joggle the money to kingdom come and need to bail-out? Cannot they take some of that money in Bahamas or Cayman Islands and bail out themselves?

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
We human beings are something else, and yet more reasons why I never venture out to those malls on Black Friday.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
trampled by a herd of humans...felt sad reading about it yesterday - but 'grown men' shooting each other in ToysRUs, well, that made me laugh! I know it shouldn't, but it is too ridiculous! Obsurdly shocking :( Later, i obviously need to listen to Louis A's Oh What a Wonderful World, to check on my faith in human nature - its not looking good presently. Good social commentary Karla, ('Holidays are for Grinches, anymore...' What are Grinches?! I didn't understand that part! i will investigate!:o)xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
gosh,,it is really pathetic how people act over materialistic things...for what??? why??? My heart and prayers go out to the family whom have been pained by such a tragic and senseless loss.
May God comfort them.

Reviewed on November 29, 2008
This is a living greed, karla and should be stopped. How to stop it is the next poem you should take. Smile.
abdi-noor

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
You express the outrage that a lot of us feel. Great job, Karla. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Karla, I was going to write about the Long Island Walmart incident, too, I was so disgusted-and to think, for a holiday based on Christ, makes me LIVID. Thanks for drawing attention to these people.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Girlfren' you hit the nail in the cross. This is NOT what Jesus would do. It might be best if we all know exactly what this Black Friday nonsense was really all about....WALL STREET!

Do we forget so quickly about the 700 billion dollar plus bailout for those who make money on folks who are too lame to realize the essence of the game? GREED for the rich....and PAIN for the slaving poor.

I think the United States of America needs a revolution against corporate America especially at Christmas. My gifts this year will be cards and hugs. Nobody stomps people to death over those. bless you and stay safe. God bless you and Karen SUPER good because the holidays are for crazed people...even families are nuts over things that should not split them up.

Going to Walmart now to get something I need....BOTTLED WATER!
love you,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
I heard about the Wally mart thing, but didn't know about the toys r us thing...man I am glad i don't go shopping till the night before xmas and usually at a 7-11 or like that, or if I feel really magnanimous, I might even shop at a local drug store...LOL, Ed

Reviewed on November 28, 2008
I think they ought to outlaw "After-Thanksgiving" sales, or better yet, get back to the Real Reason of the Season, like you said: "take the first part of Christmas out, and there you have it." No wonder. Sad! And that poor man's family: what should be a time of joy will now be a time of sadness, and for WHAT?? A tv?? A camera? That hot toy?? SHEETS??? NUTS!! Painfully penned sadness; powerfully penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
well expressed--so sad to allow ones self to be reduced to such behavior

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Hi Karla,it is so sad at what happened to that walmart employee.I swear this country and the world lacks humanity.People just don't care anymore.I also heard of the shooting at a toys r us store in California.What a despicable world we live in.Thank you for the poem,take care

Edwin


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