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Love is Dead
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Must harden my heart so it doesn't get
broken.  Tired of picking up the pieces
time after time, and yet, I keep handing
it out, hoping and praying this time will
be different.  You'd think I'd learn not

to give people something so delicate
and fragile.  They drop it once more
and I watch it hit the floor and shatter
like glass.  Slicing fingers to ribbons, I
come to the conclusion:  love is dead.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (11/2)

 


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Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
I can really relate to these emotions, Karla. Love is risky business. Nicely penned!
Sheila

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
Though your words hit hard, no, I do not think love is dead but seemingly very elusive and unfortunately, at times very fickle.
Your friend in Southern California, Mark

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Love takes it's leave when it sees fit. The trick is in the blindfold. Patrick

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Oh no, I do hope not. Well penned tho sad. Hugssss, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
I think love dies more than anything else, but when it's alive, how wondrous it can be.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
I never knew when love was alive!

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Karla, I have been where you are....I think a lot of us have...but don't close the door...hope must be kept alive. Powerful write that touches the heart.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
It certainly seems that way at times. Good one.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
the pain surely runs deep-well expressed!

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
I particularly like the clear image of the second strophe and the sudden conclusion.
It is sad, but part of what we sometimes feel.

Axilea

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Karla, such a sad poem- but our love of Jesus and his love for us never dies.We may fall out of love with someone, but we know we are loved and we love Jesus. To me that is more powerful than any human love.This was a very powerful title, and it sure sparked my attention. Made me realize how much I believe in love. Deep and faithful love. I know you were talking about romantic love- but boy your title touched me. Thank you for that. That is what good writing does.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
No! Dear Karla! Love never dies not even after death for love leaves its own footprints in time and is immortal. We are fooled sometime by what we think is love but LOVE....It always comes to those who wait.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Strong write Karla but love never truly dies and neither does a heart..bruised yes, bleed a little yes, but when it comes to love their is always just a little bit left.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
This is a tough one, Karla, tough to accept but I think deep inside even if we know it's true we keep on hoping and trying.

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
. . . and then there are those who had love and wasn't aware of it . . .

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
..it can be defeating at times,,,but it will bloom again, yes it will,
as you hold the love!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Dear Karla love is not dead, you are just looking in the wrong places. I know because I did for far too many years but look what I found hiding in the right place, my husband who have given me happiness and love for 37 years. Don't give up keep searching.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
... love is dead... long live love!!! We DO seem to have, at times, a love-hate relationship with love, Karla. Yet it is truly irresistible and some hearts are just MADE to love, notwithstanding the cost... like flowers are made to bloom. I wrote a poem like this a while back... something to the effect that if you wear your heart on your sleeve, some blokey will come along and wipe his nose on it!!! :)) Everyone who has ever loved will know what this feels like. Keep blooming and blossoming your heart's fragrant scent... for such was it made and there will come a time when it is truly savoured and treasured by the One who is intoxicated by it. Lovely work, thank you xx

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
It always hurts, yet it never dies. Love yourself enough that it heals well. THese words are universal. LadyJ

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Maybe you're just looking in the wrong places.
And what would hardening your heart do to your poetry?
There are two dreams that I've held onto for forty years
that still haven't found any fruition. When i complain to
God the only word that reverberates in my spirit is patience.
love r

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Gabriel Garcia Marquez once wrote: "my heart has more rooms than a whorehouse." Hang in there. I know the feeling. This is an incredible poem, by the way. Vivid and cutting, like the shards of shattered heart one feels he or she must recollect after every successive battering. That's life I guess. Beautiful work and something anyone can relate to. That's what makes a great poem.

Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Sad one today, Karla; powerfully penned! Never feel unloved or worthless because you're NOT. Those who think you are are wrong! They don't know the Karla I do! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on November 2, 2009
What's going on Karla, that Texas heat getting to you?
You know where love is don't you? Right!
Blessings and Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Karla,

I've neve felt that love is dead,
only preoccupied.

Same conclusion?

Love, gene.


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
No, love is not dead. Like God, it is eternal. Cheer up, Karla.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
All too well I know these feelings because, no, love isn't dead. It, like hope, springs eternal, seeping out from between the seams of the oft-mended heart, always searching. Rebecca

Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Perhaps it needs a revival, a renewal, a great write, thank you Karla
In Christs Love
Michelle~


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