Five Lines About Rain (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 1, 2010

Who can pass a puddle without wanting to jump in...
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 1, 2010

Puddles here and puddles there, will love to see you jump on those!

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 1, 2010

Puddles are marvelous; just ask my dogs!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 1, 2010

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Beautiful way to think, Karla!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Absolutely gorgeous, Karla, I laughed, I sang, I jumped; especially love the 'five' lines, guess some of us are missing that, the carefree beginning, or ending.

Erin Elizabeth kelly-Moen

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

That looks like a really big puddle, maybe you should bring some scuba gear, you know...just in case.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

So true. there is nothing like a warm summer rain...to play in.
fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Praying the texas storms they are showing aren't near you and Karen!
Well done lines!

ET

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Great concision, and I love the personal use of the half-full glass which is quite unexpected when you talk about rain!

Axilea

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

I can just see you doing cannonballs and bellyflops in the bigger puddles...;-) ed

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Great poem. Need some of that rain out here.

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Karla...And soft rains are wonderful to walk about - no umbrella! Don't mind stepping in the puddles, either, but my "jumping" days are over :o) Rainy days are also good to cuddle with my cats and a good book! Enjoying your 5-Liner...
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Well done Karen thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Nice one, Karla.

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Oh, me too! I love the rain! Good capture, Karla!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

Lovely, and the piccy is fantastic! Great job, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Just as long as it doeesn't cancel the fireworks or parade on the Fourth, I will be HAPPY! :) Same goes for the Freedom Festival!!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 30, 2010

wonderful!!!