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Summer Afternoons
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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summer afternoons
laze themselves on hammocks of
high humidity

and sun.

they don't care to move
from the spot they've claimed under
the shady oak tree ---

would you?


(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (9/15)

 


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 Reviews of "Summer Afternoons"
Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on September 20, 2010
I like to imagine I'm lazing on a hammock stretched between two palms, with acres of sand beneath me and blue seas stretching to the horizon. Maybe someday I'll realize that dream. Great write, Karla! Rebecca

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 18, 2010
Time for me to haul out my hammock, I need some lazy time...great write, Karla
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 17, 2010
Karla, I could laze in the luxury of the Summer afternoon you have pictured so eloquently. A hammock under a shady oak or elm. Time to reflect, relax, dream, it's heavenly Karla. May peace and love be with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on September 17, 2010
Nice word picture here Karla. I was thinking of how cats and dogs often dominate the best perches on hot afternoons. Hugs, J

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 16, 2010
nice work!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 16, 2010
Love the way you use your words, Karla. And I'm going
to miss those lazy summer afternoons. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2010
It takes Old Man Winter with his sharpened ice teeth to move that monster off his bum! Good poem.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 16, 2010
Sounds like a perfect summer afternoon to me Karla.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 16, 2010
Soothing write, Karla. Well done.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
Ah, Karla, this is so sweet and soft...makes me wish summer would simply stay.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
Gentle, evocative setting and atmosphere, Karla.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
very nicely done,Karla, you do great with short poems!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
In a very few words, you have effectively shared the ambiance of the summer afternoon; I also love the metaphorical tone, Karla. Well done. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on September 15, 2010
This is awesome Karla, I love it
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
like the originality of this one Karla, as the last of summer days seem to cool their heels...
fee

Reviewed on September 15, 2010
Such a welcome break that would be ... that and cooler temperatures! (Hold on; cooler weather is coming ... eventually ... LOL) Well done, Karla; enjoyed this one!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on September 15, 2010
Oh I would like to take such a break.
Much enjoyed.

John


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