kids playin in da snow in da bronx (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

kids playin in da snow in da bronx
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deres roberto lets gettim soun like fun yas game yeah yeah cool man yas got ya ammo yeah plenny whaddabout you i gots enuff me too chad oh yeah johnny yeah i gots more den enuff johnny looks like yas got nuff to start a war oh yeah snowball war fixin t start shhhhh here he comes shhhhh do yas havta be so noisy hes gonna heah yous guys q u i e t giggle SHHHHHHHHHHHH whistling hes comin gettin closer closer almost heah almost W H A P ya gottim good shot aw geez right in da FACE awright WHO TREW DAT if i catches yas WHAP dangit thats cold geez its runnin down my shoit w h a p w h a p p you dip--your turn sucker w h i f f dangit i missed but i didn't W H A P neider did i w h a p got yas oooohhhh man you're gonna die now sucker W H A P W H A P W H A P W H A P W H A P W H A P aw man gittim holdim im gonna stuff it down his drawers NOOOOOOO oh yeah man NOOOOOOO dang ya lettim poke me in da eye HOLDIM DONT STUFF IT DOWN MY PANTS johnny stop AWWWWW GEEZ DATS COLD gaspgaspgasp cmon guys i gotta rest whaddaya say if i asks my mudder t make hot cocoa oh yeah soun good don it fellas yeah yeah sides i gotta pee yeah me too me tree specially on a cold day like tday yeah geez its cold snowy too snowin like anyting lets go see if shell make some up gotta warm up gotta pee yeah geez its cold ya said dat snowy too ya said dat too but it is nevah seed it snow so hard awww man yas dont remember coupla winters back dat blizzard we gots dat was some serious snow but dey didna close da schools dey only close da schools when it get bad yeah like today no school ya dummies dats cause its a holiday oh yeah fergot happy presidents day ya gots ya flags hangin out i did but da wind blew it off ya shoulda seen mine pop chasin it down da street yeah but i tink were gonna have t take it down cause its so windy naah dad said it was snowin an blowin too hard t put da flag up wonder if derell be school tmorrow mebbe dis will continue all night yeah mebbe well get tree feet deyll close school fo da res of da week wouldn dat be nice sure would yeah yeah wouldn dat be sweet

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2003

You nailed that New York accent perfectly!

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Excellent This is great(:
Huggs
Lady G.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

You are sssssoooooooooo good!

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

ROFLOL.. Iris and I spent a few days in the Bronx back in May and I have to say I can just imagine her cousins acting just this way.. :) What a cute write indeed.

Love
Melanie

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 17, 2003

luv it... makes me feel right at home...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Excellent humor so excellent I love it. smiles
Lady Peg

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Superb write Karla...very very cute write!!!

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

A lot of fun but I'm ready for spring. Nice
work Karla.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Outstanding, Karla, wonderful humor.

Reviewed by Eileen

Karla you have to get some kind of prize for this one...ROTFLMAO...I can't stop laughing, I had to get up and go to the bathroom....hahaha...you are too much!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

this is too cute; can just hear those new yorker kids talking in their special way! this is too funny; perfect for a cold winter's day (especially since that part of the world is gettin' hammered by snow!)!! remember the snowball fights of our youth in ohio? *whap/whap/whap* ~POW! OWWW! My EYES!~ thanks for the fun memories; sure do miss that white stuff; maybe boston, nyc, and the rest of the east coast can send us snow hungry texans some of that white stuff? lord knows we could sure use some; and they sure would probably love to get rid of some of it!! :) >grins < love, your twin, karen lynn. *whap* er, i meant(((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

hee hee snow sounds fun now almost im buried in it right now!!!LOL LOL this was absolutely cute