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gimme back my hour of sleep! (a rant)
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gimme back my hour of sleep!
i don't sleep all that
good
anyway
thunderstorms
even the mere threat
of severe storms
is guaranteed
to make for a
restless night
praying
anticipating
gotta watch the radar
hoping against hope
it don't turn
ugly
here
pain in my body
uncle arthur has
moved in
i want him
to move OUT
he doesn't just
stay in one
spot
he travels
oh the back looks nice
so do the feet
methinks i'll stay here
a while
get too cold
or too hot
nightmares
sometimes real
woolly ones
real screamers
that'll ruin the rest
of the night
my twin sister
snooooring
like a freakin'
freight train
*is that a tornado*
nope only my twink
turn over
she does
ahhhhh peace and quiet
for 'bout two minutes
then she's at it
again
any position
twink can snore
weather radio
"alert standby"
feature
set the thing on
before bed
go to sleep and
if bad storms
develop or enter
your area
*earsplitting screech*
that sucker's LOUD
loud enough to wake
me and twink
but also both sets
of neighbors
possibly the dead
whom i'll be joinin'
if that thing
gives me a
sudden heart attack
HA
gotta stay prepared
only bad thing
once in a while
signals get crossed
it tones an alert
for johnson county
OKLAHOMA
i live in johnson county
TEXAS
worries about bills
worries about family
worries about friends
the news
images of terror
played and replayed
over and over
and over and over
and over again
will i ever sleep again
then
they stole an hour
of sleep from me
daylight savings time
and i want it back
NOW


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 Reviews of "gimme back my hour of sleep! (a rant)"
Reviewed by John Hutchinson
Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Loved it!

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
he he he he he..Your so funny, girl..LOL

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
I couldn't agree more

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
Yes, I want that hour back, too! But next time you can't sleep, don't count sheep..talk to the Shepherd. He's up all night anyway. :) Enjoyed this rant!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
You remind me of my siste-in-law. She also complains of that hour stolen. But you'll get it back end of summer. Excellent poem though.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
those types of storms are terrific, aren't they? hurricanes, tornadoes, i'm certainly feeling your apprehension! an exciting drop, poet!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
couldn't agree more...

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Good write Karla, this time change has me all messed up today.
Jack

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Kool write enjoyable

William

Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Ha! This was great! Loved this rant! Like you I want that hour back!

Love it!

Reindeer

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
I have insomnia dont usually get sleep so know how you eel when you dont get sleep

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
This is very good. I missed it to.
Peg

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Hahaha get mine back too will ya Karla...what a day...I sure missed that hour..great write...floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
agree I feel the loss too;-) good lament Karla...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Oh well, life is tuff sometimes?
Have a good one and keep your chin up.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Karla, I agree. I am exhausted today too! I went to bed an hour early and it still didn't make a difference!!
Tkcare,
Jill

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Karla,,,(((hugs))) I'm sure there are many out there today that feel the same way! Gaining an hour is one thing,,,losing it is another! We don't appreciate that. Go to bed early tonight and make up for it,,Lisa ps. I read your poem on iwvpa, I thought it was great! I'll be looking for the other one soon,,,,Lisa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
Funny...

Reviewed on April 6, 2003
sorry if i snored too loudly for you; i don't know i do that; i am asleep! HA! :)
cute write; here's hoping you get a more restful sleep from here on out! love, your (snoring) twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)


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