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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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reality
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i didn't know
what war was going be like
thought i did
from watchin' old movies
and talkin' to my granpa
who was in world war two
the heroes always made it back
the bad guys were killed

i didn't know
what war was gonna be like
sure they trained us
said what it was goin'
to be like
but they didn't tell
the whole truth
baby let me tell you what it was like

reality is
they are the hunters
you are always the prey
reality is
you've gotta be on guard
twenty four seven
reality is
you can never rest
you don't know when they'll strike or how
reality is
seein' your first dead body
knowin' someone ain't comin' home
reality is
seein' a baby or child
that's been injured or killed
reality is
the weather is against you
you'll never think you'll ever get warm/cold/dry/wet again
reality is
your equipment screws up
just when you need it it always fails
reality is
seein' your buddies cut down
right there beside you
reality is
you lived
they didn't

WHY??????????


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Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Life itself is a war and struggle to survive. Why do some of us survive and others die? Is a good question. Nice expression Karen and mind provoking.
"I survived." others died. I've been asking that question for years now. Finally, I'm just glad I got a second chance at life. ((smiles))Grady

Reviewed on April 12, 2003
i wish i knew why we have wars here, karla. there are no easy answers. a powerful, emotion-charged write; thanks so much for sharing! (((HUGS))) :( >tears <

Reviewed on April 12, 2003
That is "reality" that reality talks, and strikes thoughts responding to "reality" points. This poem comes with the wake up song, and it sounds meaningful.

I Salute the Author of "reality".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
I am not sure there is an answer we could really accept.
This really touched me.
Sharon;)
Thank you for your kind words on my work

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
and that's real. deadly drop right here, poet...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Wish I knew Karla
your friend Ron

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
So good!!! Hugs
Peggy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
well done, Karla.

Reviewed on April 11, 2003
This was so powerful and real, just touched me so, With its vivid portrayal of reality.

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Karla this is stark reality...your question is one that has no real answer;-) Most would say it wasn't the persons time to go.Thanks for your support!


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