what color am i? you ask me. it's
hard deciding...some days i'm a bit
blue--when i am feeling very sad
black--watch out--my temper shows i'm mad
brown--the color i turn, from the sun
white--i'm shocked! surprised! or even stunned!
yellow--i hope i *never* turn this
(something in my liver may be amiss)
pink--when i've been in the sun too long
red--my face shows i've said something wrong
green--ooh, i'm not feeling very good
(or jealousy shows...not that it should)
a rainbow of color, that is me
depends on my mood, my sanity!!!! :)
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Reviews of "what color am i? (for kate clifford's challenge)"
I almost lost my bladder on the way..........hehehehehe...with this....I had to run.........white--i'm shocked! surprised! or even stunned!
yellow--i hope i *never* turn this
(something in my liver may be amiss)
All those "bottlebabies".....lol!!
hmmmm....i hope i never see you turn yellow either (or BLUE)! (if you turn blue, it is time to call for an ambulance! AMBULANCE! NO TAGBACKS! SORRY! LOL) interesting and humorous write with a good message! outstanding write, karla! :) (((HUGS))) p.s.: ALL HUMMERS, slugbugs, ORANGE trucks, police cars AND police officers, firetrucks and ALL firefighters, and ALL ems and medical personnel AND ambulances and ALL the American flags in THE UNITED STATES! also, all the PT cruisers! SORRY! COULDN'T resist! LOL) (love ya, sweetie!) (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. p.s.: i am in for it now, am i??? LOL
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God Bless
~Michelle~
yellow--i hope i *never* turn this
(something in my liver may be amiss)
All those "bottlebabies".....lol!!
Enjoyed your poem very much Karla!!
Love
Tinka
Love
~Chrissie
Reindeer