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checks and balances (a rant)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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it OUTTA be a crime
'cause it happens every time
when my paycheck gets here
the bills come first, i fear

my paychecks do not last
they go faster 'n' fast
there is never enough
to pay them--and it's rough

nothin left o'er--oh, well
let's see...what can i sell
gotta pay 'em right NOW
they don't care when or how

gotta eat to survive
too bad: 'cause bills arrived
can't afford to get sick
insurance? no?? (poor chick)

i do not own a car
don't live/work very far
no fancy clothes have i
i can't afford to buy

governments--do they care?
their money goes elsewhere
'cept for where it's needed
the poor get stampeded

there's homeless on the streets
some can't afford to eat
the disabled get screwed
they cut this program, too

they don't give a rat's a**
you are treated like trash
here...in the u.s.a.
the rich have all the say

and do they care? hell, no
stars...athletes...big egos
i am the working poor
fighting an unending war
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we're sending money to other nations,
and we can't take care of our own
people here at home...honest, hard-
working men and women, who are try-
ing to survive a slumping economy...

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 Reviews of "checks and balances (a rant)"
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on July 15, 2003
Life just ain't fair! Great write

Reviewed by g g (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2003
Excellent write!
Hugggs
Lady G

Reviewed on July 12, 2003
You go girl...I can relate.

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
i know the feeling, girl!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
Being a member of the same club, I understand. I always tell people "I'm so poor I can't even Pay attention!"
Bobbi

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
Amen Karla! I agree. I'll never understand why we must be protectors of the world's problems, when we cannot take care of our own. I echo the prayers others are sending your way.
Take care, Girl!!
Hugs and Love,
Jill :)
P.S. Taking a brief break from writing. I need a renewal and time to enjoy everyone else's writings.

Reviewed on July 12, 2003

Don't worry Karla. There is some fun paying the last penny to settle a bill. The rich miss this thrill.
abdinoor

Reviewed on July 12, 2003
something tells me that i'm the motivation for this good rant of a poem Karla. I know how you feel though. I referenced Mike Tyson hating himself, maybe he has so much time to hate himself because his pockets are so full and he doesn't have to worry about making it from payday to payday as we do. love u Grady

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
This is nothing new for meeeeeee...my book keeping is as bad as my love life...one big fu.#.#.#.#ing messsss!!!!
Hehehehehe....But I still liked your Rant girl!!...what color are you today??? Multicolor????LOL!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Hauntingly accurate, I am afriad this nations economic systenm is far from being right basically it's gone to h*** in a handbasket. I know exactly of what you speak.
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
very powerful, accurate write...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
You tell 'em, grrl... Hope things improve..
Jenni

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
I can darn sure relate to this! Nice write, Karla! **kotc**

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Hi sweetie. they never look out after those at home...
So sorry excellent rant!!!!
Hugs
PJ

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Our government doesn't care
People are starving here in the USA
and the government sends all our millions
to other countrys to make themselves look good
Hope it gets better for you dear one.
Much love........Ron

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Yeah, there's always more month than money.
Good rant, Karla.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
You tell 'em like it is Karla!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Words of truth, this will never change, great rant.

Nancy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Karla I hear you! excellent rant!I hope it improves soon for you. One thing about the superstars in all media,they wouldn't be where they are without the poor and middle classes supporting them! Unfortunately, we are the ones who pay their way.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
7-11-03

Ya Donut Hav Ta Sa It's Rant__ Type It_
Ya Git It Off Yor Chest, Outa Yor Head On Ta Authorsden Rite On Down Done Did it!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Hug! I know it can get tough. Your in my prayers.

Reviewed on July 11, 2003
(((((((KARLA))))))) hear, hear...i know just how you feel. i am sorry you are struggling so. wish i could help you out MORE...you are in my prayers. i am NOT stopping to pray for you--EVER! something has GOT to give! chin up, sweetie; i still love you, and so do a lot of people! i hope you get relief SOON! (((((HUGS)))) >tears, tears, tears < if only more people understood what you are experiencing, this world wouldn't be so messed up.... love, your twin, karen lynn. :(


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