trials of life (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on July 15, 2003

Those trials of life can get you down, I know that from my own life. Hope life looks up for you soon.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

as long as you put your heart into it...

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Touching work, Karla...you will do fine, lots of friends here pulling for you!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Oh Karla,
This nearly made me cry...
So sad..but part of life's
reality...

Hang in there Karla...

(((HUGS)))
Trixie :)

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

This is an excellent write Karla(:

Lifes trials come and go, seasons change as so do we(:

Hang in there
hugs and love
Lady G

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

is always best to remove the splinters of life as soon as p[ossible for a quick healing ...great work Karla

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

You definitely have to be strong in this world...hang in there girl!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

I agree with David!

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Nice association. The answer is yes, we always hold out, its just so painful at times.
David

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2003

Outstanding work Karla, very real slice of life.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Karla...this is very wonderful write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

take my hand sweetheart - for you are never alone. Often it was your hand being help out to me to get me through - let me return the hands of friendship.. You can hold out.. you have such a beautiful soul that shines through in all you so - and withing that souls is a wealth of strength hun.. Write me if you need me.. you know how to find me (( hugs )) and know I truly do care. You are in my thoughts.. I know how you feel..
Love;
Melanie

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

hold on and stand tall...wonderful write.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Your words always touch me. Been there, done it too....Thank you :) Life ---just stand there and take the blows.. Naaah, you take em then you start fighting back.

Thanks again ;)
Emilie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Ah Karla, This one touches so deeply, You are such a wonderful person, I know you will stand solid and weather this too,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

You are as sturdy as an oak and will continue to stand. You're just going through a difficult moment. Excellent write Karla!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Karla:

All of us can learn new lessons in life everyday. Everyday is a brand new day for us to make it exciting.

Good emotional write Karla!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

That border between wondering and giving up is poignantly depicted here, my friend... but hold out. I did... and Love, Light and Harmony came in.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

7-13-03

Trust Me, TRASK If You Do Not Hold Out,You Will Have To Come Back And, DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN!!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

This was a wonderful poem, keep up the great work Karla! I know you are struggling but remeber God is with you, and you have a friend in me...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Like the analogy in this one. J.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Don't worry someone will come along and give you a nice new polish :-) Hold on life does get better :-)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Ahhh, Karla.. you shall live forever, for you are firmly planted in so many hearts.. your observations are so easy to relate to.. and your positive attitude lends itself to enjoyable reading! This is great! katy.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

You are in my prayers, Karla. Chin up; things WILL get better! Don't ever give up; you are MUCH better than that! Great write! ((((HUGS))) Love ya, sweetie! As always, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Hang in there, Karla. Times will get better, I promise!
Take care!
Love ya,
Jill :)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on July 13, 2003

Nice write, karla. Hang in there.