My Light (edited) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 21, 2003

this an amazing write!

Reviewed on July 21, 2003

My God is Omnipotent, He makes no mistakes, so disability is not possible. The world sees position, while God and all those connected to Him see potential.

You are beautiful and your best is yet to come.

Thanks for the preview

Keeping the Faith and Shining The Light Of Jesus, the same, yesterday, today and forever.

Officer William Heffner

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on July 21, 2003

You're wonderful, just as you are. Don't ever change for anyone!
Beautiful write,
With Love,
Jill :)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

wonderful, I read this twice

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

Stay the way you are. You're a lovely person.
[[[[[[[[Hugs]]]]]]]]]

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

This is outstanding, dear, wise, talented friend.
(((((((((((((Karla)))))))))))))

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

7-20-3

What Cannot Be seen With The(Your) Eyes The Mind Already Knows!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

Wonderful work. Congratulations to you both.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

I enjoy your poetry......stick to your own self.....and we will read Karla's work that is unique in its own right Okay!!

It is good to learn more.......but stay yourself as well...the persomn we learned to love and respect!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

Karla, I think I am very satisfied with the result here. My Light is a unique poem in any literature. And I am very happy we worked on the music ( rhythm, meter and rhyme) without altering the mood and the vision. Read it aloud a dozen times, and see how this feels in the end.. Is it Karla's, or like someone suggests: Nevine's ( who honestly could not produce this poem in a million years.. just a foreign experience to me..)
When I read it aloud, I cannot relate to it personally, but I am filled with awe at the perseverant tone of struggle and optimism. The spirit of a unique voice echoes in every line.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

Karla, you can trust yourself, if you start to rely too much on someone else the work will become hers not yours. I like your poem very much but I have always enjoyed the distinctive voice of your poetry.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 20, 2003

i like it; each time it gets better and better! outstanding write! ((((HUGS)))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :)