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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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chronic pain (my life)
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dipped in agony
i scream
begging for relief
any
relief will do but
there is
nothing but more pain

boiled in oil
i scream
the pain God the pain
heat on
heat upon more heat
ever
increasing the pain

dropped from the sky
i scream
when i land on the
jagged
rocks breaking all the
bones in
my body the pain

yet i must go on
living
with pain pain o the
pain i
live with it and won't
let my
life be lived by pain

(C) karla dorman, 2003


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 Reviews of "chronic pain (my life)"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
I commend you Karla! I have learned that very lesson myself! I was addicted to painkillers in 1999. Finally off of them by 2001. No more trips to the Emergency room anymore. YEAH!

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Karla, hope you feel better soon; very nicely written...~DarkBard~

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
wow, powerful write. Makes me hurt all over

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Intense write. May God give you comfort from your pain--inside and out.
Love always :)Sandy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Karla this made me cry, I'm so deeply sorry. I hope it will get better. Holding you in my heart and prayers.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Very painful write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 14, 2003
((((Gentle hugs)))

I am sorry for the pain you have to suffer, remember the promise in Isaiah 40:31 I will run and not grow weary I will walk and not faint...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
sorry to know of your pain... must be intolerable...

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
I agree with Bill Murray: we all live with some kind of pain. And because we do, your voice is heard loud and clear. Keep writing it out, Karla. Good write -- it was not just understood, it was felt.

Carmen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Karla We Both Know Pain Will Never Stop,Take Aspirin Or Drink Heinz White Vinegar In Glass(Tea Spoon) Of Water, Most Of Pain Will SUBSIDE_

Your Friend TRASK

i.e. My Neck Nags Me, ButThere's NO PAIN!!!

Reviewed on September 14, 2003
I wish there was some way to ease your terrible pain, no one should suffer like this, I pray you have some pain free days dear Karla,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Painful to read, because of the helpless feeling of not being able to do anything, but I do keep you in prayer!Excellent write Karla!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Yes, write...and perhaps some of the pain will flee....my prayers are with you.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Karla, We would all do anything we could to stop you from hurting if at all possible. But about the only thing we can do is pray that God touches you and numbs your hurt. Lisa

Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Karla,

FABULOUS!!!! Write it out, give voice to those who don't have the words, don't leave me here all alone....

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
My god, Karla, your first line grabs the reader, and throws them into hell!! I've had days and months of pain, but never years... The boiling in oil really got to me...the whole conveys the hole of pain, excellent in form, stark in message. One of your best.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
It is sad Karla for you to suffer this way. And it is sad for me because I can't take the pain away. Although I would give anything to do so! No one from the outside can look in and see this pain, but we too also bear pain and hurting and we do know what that is and offer the comfort of our words to you, and our hearts love you dear. Your friend Bill Hugs and more

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
Oh Karla, there is pain in my heart as I read your vivid and well described, emotional poem of the pain that you feel. I sincerely say that I wish you endless painfree and joyous days ahead.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2003
I am so sorry Karla...I sure do know what this pain is like...I will pray for you...floria

Reviewed on September 14, 2003
vividly described and emotion-filled write; i could see and feel the pain. *OUCH* this write made me hurt! LOL well done, karla! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( here's hoping for pain-free days ahead for you; you are in my thoughts and prayers! :( >tears <


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