Deep Fried (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 26, 2003

OUCH OUCH...Ive done this Karla...it hurts..good expression..have a great thanksgiving...

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on November 26, 2003

Deep fried may not be healthy... but it certainly tastes good :0)! Yummy write, sweet friend... but don't fry too often, you're too precious!
{{{{{{{{{{{Karla}}}}}}}}}}}
Blessings,
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Excellent poetry sweetie.,
In prayers

Happy ThanksGiving

Peg

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

GREAT WRITE...KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK...
GOD BLESS
~MICHELLE~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Oh Karla you reminded me of what I used to do when young;-)Hated to leave the beach would stay for hours and get burned...great write, you captured to a Tee!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

A hot kool write ... karla

william

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

We all burn in our youth :-) Wonderful write and I think I perfer the Texas winter!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Oh my, all that is not worth it for a tan
Don't burn your turkey?
Have a great Thanksgiving karla!
Your friend,,,,,,,,,,Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Is this the time you were in Avalon, NJ, Karla or did that memory trigger this poem. I liked this one alot, it was fun and gave a message not to be ignored...But everyone still goes out on the beach some I have seen in the 70s and older, dark as night and desiring more tan...but it is our choice. As a kid living at the beach, I was almost black, even though I had had blonde hair and fair skin. I remember my mom pulling down my bathing suit and showing off the difference between my lily white butt (always embarrased me) and the rest of my bod with the dark tan! Thanks for posting a fun memory nonetheless, for me, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

yes watch that sun Karla, we want you to get sizzled. fun write cheers and love G

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Karla: You're great at writing humor and also conveying a very important message about the dangers of excessive suntanning. I've got moles on my shoulder caused by a bad, bad burn. Hoping I don't get skin cancer someday. Excellent write!!! Love, Susan

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

My friend has just gone in for skin cancer treatments after years of water skiing. He's scared! If he only had your poem earlier. Thanks, Karla

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

(((Karla)))

And while we are on that note, you neglected to mention CAJUN BLACKENED! OW! PAIN LINES! makes me HURT just THINKIN' about it! *CRINGE* LOL

Still, a very informative and cautionary write about the dangers of the sun! A subject that needs to be addressed, and you did just that in this poem! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

I like refried the best! Funny, yet so true, Karla, about the dangers of the sun. I've done the same thing. Ain't we smart!