when i die/new beginnings (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2003

Karla, you already ARE dancing, with each new write, with every new iodea that you share, and you are on a stage with an appreciative audience who love to come and see you, fascinated by your moving art! Never think any differently than that -- your poems are the nimble feet on which you canter, pirouette, leap and glide!

And, yeah, God will grant your wishes at the end of your days -- just don't rush things: God's not through with you yet here on ol' Planet Earth!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Beautiful thoughts you penned here Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

One far off day, you will get a new body,
but continue to write and bring joy
to all those around! You ain't going
anywhere just yet, friend! Not if I can
help it! I love you!
Rebecca(Becca)

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Very nicely done, Karla!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Beautiful expression of meaningful prayer. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Hey, girl u have already touched my soul & heart, so I know u have done the same to so many others, if not before this poem, then with this one, it is really beautiful...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

PLS you are not dying for a long time Love the poem sweetie but only then can you have your wish.,

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Beautiful sentiments...and moving write. Hang around a while, dear lady, for there are many wonders yet to come. Magic is not dead... May you always dwell within the softest of the Light, Jim.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Karla I can see you now...you will be dressed in white tulle and dancing to ethereal music..but not for a long long time....lovely write...floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

What a splendid piece of writing Karla! Who says you won't be writing? What do you think heaven is but just 1000 times better than earth. God will have you doing what you do best, and if it isn't writing you can still do it as a hobby,since time will be continuum, there will be plenty of it for everything;-)You will be able to dance with all of natures beauty!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

this is an absolutely beautiful write, karla; and you have touched the lives of many people, more than you may realize. in fact, you may be an angel and not even know it! that is how i view you; you are an angel, and i thank you for being so supportive of me and lovin' me through the years! i am truly blessed to have you as my twin sister; and my love for you only grows as the years go by!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D love you, karla!~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Hopefully when you die it will be far, far, far, in the future..
I'll be sad, but you'll be glad with the new body.....
Your friend with a HUG.........Ron

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Beautiful write, Karla. You never have to worry about whether or not you've ever touched a life, though. You have touched my life and my heart, many times over. You've been supportive of me, when I needed it. You've been a shoulder for me to cry upon, even when I have not asked for it and though, I probably do not tell you enough, I am very grateful for all the love and support you have shared with me.
Thanks for the friendship and this beautiful write.
Hugs and Love,
Jill

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 30, 2003

Wow, Karla. Wonderful thoughts, and here's hoping that one distant distant day you will get to dance with those Northern Lights. That would be something!