but i still love to sing raise my voice in celebration
that's what i do with my writing
sing, making a joyful noise
from the heart from my innermost parts of my being the depths of my soul reach out
so i raise my pen and from it flows
WORDSONG
(C) Copywritten, 2003, Revised, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2004
Beautiful (and wise) words
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
and I hear all those words loud and clear and it IS music to my ears....you are such a lovely person you know.....oh and I forgot to say.....this was perfect.
Karla, hope your neighbors understand that you are singing, when you write? They may call the police thinking your being tortured, LOL!? This is very pretty, as I bet, your voice really is? Peace, Ed & Rufuz
This is absolutely wonderful; this blew me away! You keep on writing, sweetie; I am in awe of how much you have improved! May you become a published BESTSELLING author; that way, I can say, "I knew her when..." Don't EVER give up writing; keep on writing! You have a gift, and this gift NEEDS to be shared around the world!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your fan and your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
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Love this one Karla!!
Love Tinka
This is a wonderful poem, keep those wordsongs coming...
God Bless
~Michelle~
This is absolutely wonderful; this blew me away! You keep on writing, sweetie; I am in awe of how much you have improved! May you become a published BESTSELLING author; that way, I can say, "I knew her when..." Don't EVER give up writing; keep on writing! You have a gift, and this gift NEEDS to be shared around the world!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your fan and your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Excellent poem.
Evelyn.