it comes (for la belle's challenge) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

Oh Karla this is intense. It makes me rethink my aches and pains are nothing by comparison. Awesome write. < < < < < < < < < < < < < <HUGS>>>>>>>>>>>Mikii

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Wonderful writing Karla...great entry to
the challenge...I also thought it most
interesting how you refer to pain as
a gift...I guess I had better start thinking
that way...maybe it won't hurt so much...
bless you...floria

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Karla, how intense was the feeling expressed in this poem. You made pain come alive ... I loved the special way you handled the structuring of the poem ... I felt lighting strike over and over again as you marched through to your conclusion. Really great writing. Wow!!! Your friend Bill. hugs .xxxooo

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Karla this is excellence in verse and in emotion. You made me feel it from the inside out!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Outstanding Karla!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

someone once told me, without pain we wouldn't know we existed ... i don't know about that but i do know your poem effectively handles the subject matter ...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Ok, my little petunia! The challenge was to make the reader "feel" it... silly me.. I expected to only feel it in my head... your
piece is so good here, I need 800 MG of Ibuprofen now! Harrumph! em.. that means you DID IT! (grin) Great stuff, Karla-la-la-la ... oops
sorry.. got carried away, started singin'... hehe... katy xox.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

expressed very well Karla, yes it comes, and comes and comes, whatever it is that bothers us all. I learned to live with mine positively. love and cheers G

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Wow, awful painful
Great job on the challenge karla
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Wonderful description...

Reviewed by Andrea Dietrich (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Interesting how you also referred to it as a gift. Not everyone realizes that, and it is one of those gifts I sure don't want! good write, andrea

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Karla this is an outstanding write and I join Kate in giving you a standing ovation!!!Brava!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Powerful write, keep up the great work...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Fantastic write!!!!!!!! Applause!!!!!!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

I guess I won't try to top that action, girl, you are the queen of pain writes! I get it so little, other than migranes or sinus headaches that I feel so small in relation to what you have or have gotten, any pain is bad, no matter where or why...Peace thru Painfree Living, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Wow..this was excellent Karla! I loved this reply to Belle's Challenge!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Ooops! Sorry Karla! I had called you Karen by mistake.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Oh the descriptive is excellent Karla.

Yes pain like a theif.
Excellent reply to Belles Challenge.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

Hi Karen:

This is well-done and well-described! I like how you have put this.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

(((Karla)))

THANKS. I felt EVERY bit of this poem, thanks to my fall today! Excellent, descriptive, powerful, intense write that doesn't let go! BRAVA; you did the challenge PERFECTLY! LaBelle will be pleased; I sure am!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp

Reviewed on March 7, 2004

You get charley horses too? Ha ha.
I like the forceful approach. Very fiting of the emotion. Great write.