Uncertainty echoes in the corners of a mind so long ago lost.
Thirst lingers in a mouth that tastes the sweet nectar of love.
Hearts that beats with the pull of every string that once was free.
Nagging emptiness that lingers within one's soul so full.
Love that shakes the very foundation of life once so sturdy.
Loneliness that wanders through the halls of doubt.
Togetherness forgotten in a crowd of people so unforgiving.
wow the strength and powerr in these lines!!!
once so sure"letting go" does that to a person
brings insecurity from way back somewhere and toss it right in our path.....you got it down packed here
great emotion felt
Reviewed by Jim Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Letting go is more than a hard thing to do. Sometimes it can be impossible. Those with the heavy load walk quietly, recognizing the other ones - the ones like them with the empty eyes and heavy hearts.
-j
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Wise words from one so young, in this semi sonnet.
Like how it builds with expectation, and ends with, two become one the the one becomes two...
Heavy thoughts conveyed in deep images from the soul and heart. This kind of pain is only caused by heartache, hope it is not recent dear Jennifer.
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Fee
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
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once so sure"letting go" does that to a person
brings insecurity from way back somewhere and toss it right in our path.....you got it down packed here
great emotion felt
-j
Like how it builds with expectation, and ends with, two become one the the one becomes two...
Be safe,
Karen
Hugs
Fee