I wrote this while going with a sistah, who would do for me. Yet, she didn't really know what my soul needed.
I'm Cold
I told you I was cold and you went and turned up the heat.
I wonder if it ever occurred to you
that it was the warmth of your mind I seek.
Again I said "Lady I'm cold"
and you went and got me a blanket.
My heart began to break my mind began to wonder and then I cried for goodness sake.
I said "Sweet Heart I'm cold" you went and got me some socks my mind went on a journey and with every heart beat
my heart slowly turned its lock.
"I'm cold baby girl, can you hear me?"
Do you even know what I mean?
Your lack of understanding has been going on for some time you don't comprehend this so it seems.
I'm cold, please understand; reach out to me as a man show me you care.
Talk to me not at me let me know you are there and that nothing comes before me.
I'm cold Sweetheart and what do you do
you go and buy some electric heat.
So because I ask to much, you gather your things. And you don't get it, so it seems.
I then see you walk away in defeat, and I still am left cold.
that is right most times with us women we want to fix the problem with actions knowing when things are on the other foot we want to be heard and understood, we have got to learn how to connect mentally or we will always be cold........
very interesting
Many emotions of loneliness and the view of one left without the comfort of another soul, which always brings warmth to the other soul....very well written expression of emotions through poetry...
nice work.....Art Sun...
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
Welcome to the A.D. i found this poem done excellent a raw slice of life so many cannot communicate within a relationshsip it does defeat the one and leave the other cold experience.....Wonderful Job.
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
How to Be Happy Partners is the perfect tool for designing and creating a relationship unique to your individual personalities and situation. Written by the authors of How to Be a Couple and Still Be Free, this is a clear and concise handbook on how
very interesting
nice work.....Art Sun...
Peace,
Josie