Stan~
I've heard of fire, being known as the BEAST, a friend I know, another Fireman (Blessed)
it's alive and beating!
This is another gem I will treasure!
YOU speak of so many truths here!
Warm Light, Love and Happiness!Warrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
P.s This poem was short and to the point too! Wow, I am impressed, to be able to say so much, and say it all just right~~!!God Bless!
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
Firemen, we stand and applaud what you do for others. Your sacrafice is great!
A Fireman is a hero who risks his life daily to save others. Through yore wonderful talented write I was able to experience what dangers a fireman must face, they should be respected and treasured! SC
Sounds like you have met the beast first hand: wanting to confront it, wanting to defeat it, wanting to overcome fear of it: most excellent, with many memorable, taut lines and images!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
ahhh....a wee bit of pyromania? almost a smoke jumper heartbeat view? or a loverly brazen blazed metaphor for the raw things that life brings. ..adored the ending "soiled but living.........both of us, to meet Fire"; a tender finale [pardon the pun :} ]
gorgeous and intelligent
.ness.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
I've heard of fire, being known as the BEAST, a friend I know, another Fireman (Blessed)
it's alive and beating!
This is another gem I will treasure!
YOU speak of so many truths here!
Warm Light, Love and Happiness!Warrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
P.s This poem was short and to the point too! Wow, I am impressed, to be able to say so much, and say it all just right~~!!God Bless!
peace,
dan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
gorgeous and intelligent
.ness.