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Melting Away
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Melting Away Sometimes it feels, as if I am melting Away My icy shell, melting Slowly slipping away Drip by drip Into a nothingness being my fate A puddle forming My spirit a shadow Fading into dirt My essence puddling Drip by drip No trace of my existence Not an outline where I stood A melted snowman Back to earth Up to the clouds I return Above Another cycle repeated Returning as snow flakes Gathered up and formed A snowball Tossed by Some punk ass kid Into the side of a moving bus Splattered against the window Of all those commuter people Going home, from another long day Empty stares into Darkness Snassano 08-06-07

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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 8, 2007

YOur spirit is STRONG!
In all your forms!
as your words came pouring down!
This touched my heart deeply Stan!
WArm hugs and Warmer love, Warrior Lady Sheeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on August 8, 2007

Well done My Friend, I too have had those same feelings. It is a part of grief I believe.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2007

Excellent writing sweet man..Hugssss

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

Well now, quite the visual you painted here. A sad metaphoric soaked piece. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

I remember a moment after my husband's death when I imagined all the tears I'd shed being a puddle that would evaporate.. and I remember thinking this was all that left of me. Anyway.. wonderful poem!

Myrna

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

engrossing write; puddles, seem to be a theme for us ;}
keep the blessings flowing~
.ness.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

Touched my heart Stan, I felt it.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

No matter what form you take, you will always be beautiful! SC

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

I have felt this many times..still do..
I guess I always will.. until I find ??---mmmmI hear ya Stan!!!
Great write..

vesna :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

I think we all feel this way at times stan.
Excellent write
Be safe...

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 6, 2007

something to think about...good pen.

dan

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