Dearest Jasmin,
You and your words ahve come to mean so much to me. This last poem is probably the most beautiful and poignant of yours I've read from you.
May all the Gods treasure your gentle spirit and keep you safe.
Old friend...I wish you the best in this time you have. Reach for the stars, but don't climb down. The view is better from up there. Words can heal what ills, I certainly wish you would reconsider. However, I understand...best wishes dear friend and may you find the peace you seek.
I'm expecting another poem in a week or two!
YOU shall see, it won't leave you Jasm/Ed
I can feel your truth in your sad words!
DON'T BELIEVE THEM!
A fleeting instance! YOU shall see and feel!
STay STrong and Happy my friend!
WArm hugs, Warmer love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STAY POSITIVE!Smell a rose and Write ON! when you're feeling your strongest dear friend~
Ed, in his laconic way, gave you an answer few others will repeat but perhaps applaud...I also hope this is not literally your statement...yes, beauty and life can be fleeting -- too much so -- but you had better stay here and write many more poems, Jasmin Horst!
Wishing you only the best,
Gina
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
That is sooooooooo sad, Jasmin! Ya, know, I have the exact same feeling about cut flowers given in bouquets. We kill the flowers to give them as gifts of love. Hmmm ...
Oh, no you don't, Jasmin, you just GOT here. This canNOT be your last poem. If this is fictional, I'ma gonna wring your neck for making me worry!! LOL (not really). But I don't want you to go. Okay, we don't have a choice in the matter, but you know what I mean!
I am certainly hoping that this poem does NOT mean you're leaving us.
However, if this is poetic talk, then I'll be ok. Cause this poem made me sad -- thinking about how all God's creation needs nuturing and in its absence, whithers up and dies.
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
we go
enjoyed this piece pint-up feelings
flowed lost wings
and perished
Be safe,
Karen
You and your words ahve come to mean so much to me. This last poem is probably the most beautiful and poignant of yours I've read from you.
May all the Gods treasure your gentle spirit and keep you safe.
Keith
Regis
YOU shall see, it won't leave you Jasm/Ed
I can feel your truth in your sad words!
DON'T BELIEVE THEM!
A fleeting instance! YOU shall see and feel!
STay STrong and Happy my friend!
WArm hugs, Warmer love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STAY POSITIVE!Smell a rose and Write ON! when you're feeling your strongest dear friend~
Wishing you only the best,
Gina
Ted
Vividly described, this one is excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
However, if this is poetic talk, then I'll be ok. Cause this poem made me sad -- thinking about how all God's creation needs nuturing and in its absence, whithers up and dies.
Kathy