Slings & pointed tips create mind games & trips - For your choice is-to be taken
through another attempt of understanding even if shaken - Challenge I like for it to
be - Rattling justification for thee - When rhyme has it’s way resolved with a sway
- Comfort aided by the other end - Adding context & content - Allowing a
rhythmic balance from which to send -
This reads like the energy and pulse of life itself to me, Ted. ALWAYS go through the hoop of "another attempt of understanding, even if shaken"... THEN one's mind will always be stirred! :)) I like your ability to conjure so much so richly with so few lines. TY Kate xx
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God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Our hearts are quite blessed
Since rhymed words convey
Our hearts' feelings the best!
A nice tribute to rhyme, Ted.
Thanks,
Jill
Maybe out of balance comment...but has rhythm!!
:) Love Tinka
Love,
Susan
Rhyme is hard for those who choose
but you know how to sing the blues.
Just a knack I must suppose
some are lost with these and those.
Like a good song my friend rhyme has to be in you. Blessings Always, Paul. ( Enjoyed )
Its my favorite word wine
Bonding spirits in kind
With author's of like mind lol
enjoyed your rhyme.......:)