Again... that last line brings it all together and makes your poem perfect.
Cryssa
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
.. .. . words are naught but sounds, longing, to be soemthing bigger than theya re. ..
and yet what miracles they can work.. .
there is always some.thing to be, said, heard, found in a real word. a real sound.
as if the turning of our axis' plays music. ..
these days, i find myself covering my ears; trying to drown out the. .. .wor.l.ds. ...
...but then stars have a way of aligning themselves.
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Profoundly said and deeply felt Ted! Visual is stunning!
Write On!
From our home to yours - HAPPY EASTER! and a Happy "NEW" Spring!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
In today’s secular environment the two worlds of science and spirituality are alien worlds, distinguished primarily by a deep-seated antagonism in which the principles of spirituality and the pragmatism of modern science exist face to face in a peren
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Cryssa
and yet what miracles they can work.. .
there is always some.thing to be, said, heard, found in a real word. a real sound.
as if the turning of our axis' plays music. ..
these days, i find myself covering my ears; trying to drown out the. .. .wor.l.ds. ...
...but then stars have a way of aligning themselves.
}{----
Write On!
From our home to yours - HAPPY EASTER! and a Happy "NEW" Spring!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
Thanks for sharing your vision!!
Love Tinka