Blues Street (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Blues Street
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Blues Street We rode into town The first time we went you could feel the danger calling to you I knew this feeling excitement, fear blues street These desperate souls meeting The cars line up in a row blues street A neon sign flashes cold beer & mixed drinks orgiastic spirits gather danger calls to them On the dance floor the heat was intense as the primitive beat of the music moves the bodies rhythmically as if in slow motion desire is power The girls were sweet in their heat Their curves moving pounding my brain You could feel the fever bodies writhing passion calling I knew this feeling on blues street The first time we went you knew you�d have to fight and the neon light buzzed blinking as fists flew like fury I felt the adrenaline flow through my veins that night blues street where blood flew mixed with liquor & sweat The girls watched They too felt the danger screaming hysterically They wished to hold it against their hot bodies like a dream The passion was ours blues street We stumble drunkenly into the night The cars line the avenue midnight had tolled Morning was before us We rode feeling the danger calling to us I knew this feeling We dreamed of the heat blues street � CJ Clark All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2004

Dale,

It was great taking a trip down memory lane aka �Blues Street,� really enjoyed this piece.

Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 27, 2004

I love this and love the blues. This is a fantastic poem Dale and one for my library
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2004

This is so well written....Dale..!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

Blues Street in any town seems to have
the same reaction calm down veins and heart {{{SMILES}}}}
This one is excellent we have a Blues Street Dance every July.. IN the night heat..
I loved the visuals in this one CJ!!!!

Peg

Reviewed by jude forese

this is a very exciting state of blues ... well penned ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

This was like a trip to the past
I can hear the blues by Art Tatum
whaling from an outdated 45rpm!;-)
Great write Dale...

Reviewed by E. Richardson

outstanding write....like several others here, I love the blues...well done, Dale

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

This was wonderful, I could feel the heat from this outstanding poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Very vivid imagery here Dale!!

It brings back sooo many memories Dale!!

Glad you made it here from tha Blues streetto tha Den!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

I love the blues...great poem Dale....floria