Your imagery is right on track and never derails as it is something almost everyone can relate to. The memories it awakens in me bring nostalgia and the love of a whistle off in the distance.
Beautiful piece of work.
Amor
Beautiful imagery ...I could almost here that train whistle.....my husband worked as a Stationmaster leading those train to follow the right tracks.....trains were part of our life for 25 years!!
Steam trains at first then came the diesel Units!!
Love Tinky
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
All Aboard!!! Great ride Poet!!! Keep The Faith.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
This one Dale felt as though one were reflecting on their life. And awesome Poem....
I love this one Dale, trains and their whistles
have always aroused a sense of adventure in us.
The town I live in is a hub for trains, so we hear
the whistles often, and my mind always fills with
thoughts of a mysterious journey.That's how your
poem effected me too;-)!
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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Beautiful piece of work.
Amor
Steam trains at first then came the diesel Units!!
Love Tinky
have always aroused a sense of adventure in us.
The town I live in is a hub for trains, so we hear
the whistles often, and my mind always fills with
thoughts of a mysterious journey.That's how your
poem effected me too;-)!
The sound of that whistle is very resonant.
It's the howling spirit of release. Great job Dale. Lisa