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I'm Unforgiven
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I am Unforgiven these empty lines await verse await meaning teary are my eyes as I gaze onto this page smeared with ink the verse is the same without change it ebbs and flows the sea which is me waves color the shore carried by the muse washes her pain this sky is inky black like the night and only stars fall a seductive moon glows sunlight is bright, illuminating it repeats itself hollow pages of words which are all so futile the muse warns you are faithless I�m unforgiven � CJ Clark

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Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

there's something subtle about this I can't put my finger on. It's like someone searching from grace and not finding there way back home. This is filled with sorrow. Stirring write.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Dale, this touches the heart, I know this feeling too well....sad but beautifully written...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Dear Dale,

Such a sad and touching write. Certainly touches the core, but still so well expressed, so fear not the muse.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2004

Very sad but beautifully written.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Wonderfully expressed, CJ. Much enjoyed!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 13, 2004

Painful read dear One!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

what power the muse holds over us! and what she demands of us.

Reviewed by Rosemarie Yusen (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

these empty lines await verse; this is a very powerful few words. I like with so few placement of words that one can say so very much.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

This is too close to home. Good poem. Good isight.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

Dale, such a beautifully written poem!It
stirs the senses haunts them too,you reach
the reader in unusual dephts with this one!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

She's beating you again, huh? Great poem, Dale. Miss you.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

Describes perfectly what many of us feel, far too many times.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

Great lines.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

(((dale)))

haunting, tear-filled lines--very effectively conveyed emotion of the threatened loss of the muse--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 12, 2004

touching and eerie

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The picture was created by a friend <br>who I want to give credit. Thanks Susie! ;)

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