Open doors...shutters flying
I drove down a dirt road of dreams,
wind was blowing all around me
An old farm house stood silently,
all the doors open...shutters flying
A grin came over my face,
as I envisioned you laughing
You were luminous and lucent,
standing in that doorway,
now abandoned to the wind,
where dirt and sand blows in
An oldie plays on the radio,
I guess I was daydreaming
You standing there smiling so pretty,
wearing bellbottom jeans and barefooted
A girl without a purpose,
it struck me like a blue streak
You and I were lightning
and thunder was the sound we made
As I drive by I couldn't help it,
I slammed on the brakes and drove in
I guess I thought you'd be there
but of course not, I laughed out loud
vanishing into the house, whistling,
like some ghost was gonna jump out
In a way that was true , you'd vanished
long ago, we never said goodbye
There's always open doors...shutters flying
I turned around and drove off,
just like I had all those years past,
lost in a trance, your image smiles back,
I watch you dance in my mind, barefooted
© CJ Clark
It really dances and has a great beat to it, there's a little tune to it, too.
I can see you and her in that barn. This poem is Superb!!.
Lost in a trance, your image smiles back, I watch you dance in my mind, barefooted...
This poem really keeps the innocence alive and felt.
Thank You, I love it!. (c:)
Tracey
You and I were lightning
and thunder was the sound we made
just kinda knocked the wind outta me.
This is utterly beautiful.
~Mari
Lol!!
Very vivid read Dale...extra vivid in every way!!
Love Tinka
sweetened by time
so real Dale......:)
and thunder was the sound we made "...Wow Dale!
love this poem, it storms into the senses and blows
around in the mind like a tornado of love has hit you!;-)
etw