Karmic Love (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 19, 2005

Dale,

I read this yesterday but didn't make it back here to comment.
It is very touching!

P.S. I looked into some of the things you were asking
me about and I will be sending you some information tonight.:)

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

Deep sad & longing poem
it's gentle in my memory - love that
Thanks Dale
Tracey

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

So bittersweet with some wonderful and memorable lines, Dale; better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all - especially if it produces such a fertile and fruitful soul. Like fine wine, love can age with us so that when we are surprised by a "fresh one" it can be even more full-bodied, perhaps, than the first! Sorry, just the way my mind is working at the moment...!! Dreaming love is karma... but karma whether real or dreamt can be full of love - even walking down the street! Soulful and real. Love this, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

Beautiful and so sad Dale, this was excellent.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Karmic Love... and yes, unfulfilled. I love the expressions here, Dale. It puts you in that dream state while reading it, one that so many of us know of.... thank you for sharing....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

There are two types of kharma: good and bad. this has a sense of longing that has not been fulfilled.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Bittersweet poetry....well written Dale!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Sad but beautiful write.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

We’re young for a moment
then time ages us boldly

this is like an anchor to a poem that skillfully conveys the desire to dance free and the illusion that we can do no more because of the calendar or the clock. really nice write. Dawn

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

wow, how sad but beautiful

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

A wistful poem Dale of vanishing moments, but hope still
comes with the knowing of Karma...Our hearts can always
soar if we remember to dream...

Love,
Alrisha

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

We’re young for a moment
then time ages us boldly

How so very true, Dale.