Cloudy Dreams (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on June 3, 2005

vivid descriptions. There are many things both wonderful and mysterious hidden in the clouds. exquisite write.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 2, 2005

Dale,

You just keep reaching new heights in your work!
I am smiling at Linda's comment! lol!
Love the imagery in this!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 1, 2005

Magnificent imagery here yet again, Dale.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on June 1, 2005

nicely done

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

Dale,
This is Exquisite, Such passion with such class and taking it to where the mind really goes. Beautiful poetry!

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

Ethereal and sensual write with a haunting illusiveness. Many moods and many masks. We of the female persuasion must be an enigma to the opposite sex. And in that mystery is true attraction. God did something right, huh?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

Splendid poetry Dale!!

Love Tinky

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

Beautiful ecstasy portrayed in the world of the universe but lands right back down on earth in a dream that must not be forgotten. Splendid write. Pure poetry at its best.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

Gracious! This is heady stuff, Dale, and a wonderful and tantalising mix of the descriptive and the undeniably mystical and enigmatic - which, after all, sexual climax is all about n'est ce pas?! And you must have a very good "inside informant" because, thinking about it, this is a very elusive description of female orgasm... clouds are a very good imagist "hook" to use to describe the ephemera of the experience. Maybe it's the same for the blokes, but I think not, probably! Imagine the male climax has connotations of being a bit more "hard-edged" and steely, somehow... but then, how would I know?! Go you! You trace the mystery of each unique experience with the tip of a tongue or a pen here, and it's pretty spot on! I'm already feeling vaporised... :)) Kate xx

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

The 5th stanza set me dancing. What a combination of words to arouse the reader's feeling. Great, great write.

Emeka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 31, 2005

Dale you have me spellbound with this ethereal cosmic beauty!
I have to keep reading it, you have become a sorcerer;-)Kudo's!
Utterly enchanting poem!

Love,
Eileen