Sail into the night perversions avail may cause you fright
Sail into the night lost souls wail at the winds spite
Sailing ship into waters frought with strife
Sailors unleash their sails the mast is beaten broke by the sea's lust
The sails torn by sorrow hoping to find their lover
Sailors of lost souls will dream of tommorrow and the lonesome wind that tosses the sea waves that swallow the pain of heartbreak to right their wrong.
Danger now begins laughing out loud in our heads to make perverse the wind down deep into the din
Strangers meet upon the waters and the sea covers their hearts and cast their souls into the breaks
Storm clouds on the horizon create the night frights that leave the lost souls alone and the night is dark
Sailing the waters tonight longing for tomorrows light and forever the sea washes over the bow and releases their sorrows
Sail into the night lost souls find hope from waves of pure hearts nothing can keep them apart from their true journey
Sailing tonight searching for their lovers without any fright with a pure heart only then can they love and feel the sea's delight
this is beautiful and dreamy. this seems to be spoken by someone who has lost his or her way but then the stars light the way back home again. Incredible write.
This encompasses all of life, Dale. Epical and haunting! We are born of the sea, it supports and nourishes us while we live. It bears our sorrows and echoes our anger. We sail on a ship of dreams--all lost souls in a spiteful sea. Until love brings us to harbor and the sea quiets. An awesome beauty!
A nearly mystical flow of desire, passion, and longing fill these lines until they move through the reader like waves pushed along by the music of the voice of the poet. Beautiful indeed.
You've made me want to go on another cruise...sigh! Wait a minnit, I don't have to, all I have to do is ready this poem...and look at my pictures...and relive it all over again! Masterfully directed--sail on, Captain!
This is quite a different canvas for you, Dale, and your imagery is just as strong. You are certainly adept at the depth of sustained metaphor you are able to bring to the gamut of human love-emotions. I like the way you saw this one through... like sailing through the eye of a storm... neat! Don't think my sealegs are that good, though... think I am a bit of a fair-weather sailor... think?! KNOW for certain sure! :)) TY Kate xx
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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This is Fantastic! (c :) the last lines, the whole truth of love. xo
This one is one of your very best ones!
Reindeer
blessin's DC,
cynth'ya lewis reed
You've made me want to go on another cruise...sigh! Wait a minnit, I don't have to, all I have to do is ready this poem...and look at my pictures...and relive it all over again! Masterfully directed--sail on, Captain!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
a superb blend of mixed emotions like the waves you travel.
Eileen
Oh My a keeper for sure my friend!!
Deep deep...most deeply touched poetry!!
Love Tinky
I am starting to re-think that now