Free Cloud Flying (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Free Cloud Flying
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Free Cloud Flying We were free cloud flying, high plains drifting The clouds float above us We ride to fly and fly to be We were free cloud flying, freeway fades into the horizon Vertigo is merely a ruse The distance was far yet we travel with speed Tetons are covered with rain, it falls like the clouds down, down unto the ground Our tears are homeward bound as we leave the beauty behind us We see only sand and wind High plains desert is greeting us with glee We were free cloud flying, floating towards another plane We feel only the loss The loss of tears like rain turning into a dry wind Storm cloud flying, lightning flashes ahead thunder warns of reality We were freeway driving Vertigo was just a ruse It�s only the desert truths that scare the uninitiated, that scar the broken hearted One day the sand will blow covering us with dust We will free cloud fly �Dale CJ Clark

Reviewed by Anne Brooks

Reviewed on September 17, 2005

great poem..a vertiginous feeling of falling ,falling and coming back up to the horizon..a bit like in the cockpit a glider..stalling and falling.. threatened by thermals.. beautifully written. anne.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Very well done, Dale! I enjoyed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

One with the earth and sky makes me dig your verses. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Another captivating write, Dale - and free cloud flying sounds marvelous.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Stunning piece Dale!!

Welcome back home!!!!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2005

Dale,
Magnificent! Free Cloud Flying is as peaceful as other rides.(c ;)
Lot of truth in this and I Love it! Thanks Dale xoox42
Tracey Hope you had a nice vacation.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

this has a definite Western flavor. you know I am beginning to notice that more and more in your work. it has a love of the land and nature. this is a flight of fancy too.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

This was lovely, so very inspiriational, gives you something to hope for!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Harley Porter (Reader)

Wow. I really like your style of writing. Very creative. I got into this poem. It was rythmic and flowing, almost like a song. Write a beat and I'll SING that shit. Hah.. Thumbs up, brutha.

<3 <3

Reviewed by E T Waldron

How can we not love the premise! To free cloud fly is a dream we all share;-)Wonderful poem Dale, very UPlifting!