Beyond the Horizon (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

My kind of world, Dale. You wrought it so perfectly.

~ Mari

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

timeless wonder this is.

Reviewed by Dragon Blue (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

I do love your very vivid imagination! Hope to see you in the trenches as DragonBlue's

)O(
DragonBlue

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

We are limited in our existence by the parameters of time and space and our own learned and circumstantial experience. I suppose it serves the purpose of grounding us to reality and the lessons we must learn in our own skins. But I think that we all know intuitively where we came from and we long for that place 'beyond the horizon'. A fine write, Dale...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

you made me believe ... nicely written ...

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

I love this CJ!
"Neither reality or dream". That line really got my attention
An absolutely perfect description of how I feel about "over there".

Thank you.

Bonnie

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

I love when people can sum things up in clean, stark images-good work.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

It's been such a long time since I've read poetry by you Dale. This is my fault and not yours. I'm glad that I'm in your den now and can read your words once again. You write so expressively and I love this one.
Luv and friendship... Chanti

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

Excellent offering on the challenge Dale!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

Dale,
Now you know why I chose to stay there!
I love the peace and the make-believe, not only is it always safe, but there are no limits and boundries to hold one back.
Awesome write Dale!

Lisa

Reviewed by Leah Wilson

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

Ahh...how I enjoyed this quantum leap with you. Very serreal! I love it. Love Leah

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 19, 2005

wonderful writing, Dale

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 19, 2005

Sometimes there is more reality in other dimensions;-) A wonderful write of desirous hopes Dale!

Eileen

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 19, 2005

Enjoyed the theme. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2005

Yes, it is make believe to us, but beyond the horizon is rweal-time for the folks living over there. Oops, you threw in "another dimension," didn't you? Well, drat. Okay, it is make-believe. Good.