This is one of your best, Dale. You took me with you, but I'm not certain of where. Enjoyed this one to the n'th degree. Rain is always welcome... especiall this Spring. Yeah, Rain! - Bill
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Dear CJ,
Once the spring is tamed, the summer will run wild.
I love those spring storms ... I find the rain, wind, thunder & lightning invigorating!
Ooooooooooooooooo... you got me, Dale... The recipe for excellent poetry is all here... you leave out 50% of what we're all burning to know and keep us with you through this intriguing scenario and day, from dawn to dusk and through all points of the compass... with wind and all shades of personal relationships and emotions thrown in for good measure. Yet you tell us... only less than half, methinks! After a day like this (I perceive), a good hard rain WOULD be refreshing as all amassed assumptions are thrown out, still none the wiser than at the beginning of the day. Love this! TY Kate xx
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
simply lovey
the images and the tones
enjoyed this much
Once the spring is tamed, the summer will run wild.
I love those spring storms ... I find the rain, wind, thunder & lightning invigorating!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Love Tinky
Be safe,
Karen
Beautiful Dale!
I like the progression of the poem and your responses to the rain.
Picturesque!
Connie