something has to get this spring warm,
cause it's been too cold I'm gonna move
into the desert ;)
Hot Day
(got me going)
Hot, Hot, Hot
glistening off shiny
bodies on the beach
mirages rising
the heat creates
Lady Love
of my dreams
She burns
heating my fantasies
now just one hot ember
I flicker & ignite
Hot, Hot, Hot
then a spring storm
sprinkling on our umbrellas
take a peek
the rain has no chance
to cool this heat
Listen
Can you hear the melody
it plays for you and me
got me going
rocking and rolling
a vision of time gone by
but never forgotten
even if it is a mirage
you still feel it
it shall never die
this light of love
Hot, Hot, Hot
rules the day
the sunlight so bright
you dare not deny
loves' mystery
Wonderful write! I would be happy to send you some heat, we get too much of it here!
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Hot write! Here it has been very warm for about a week now and no sign of it getting cooler for awhile......not complaining since our winter was long and cold.
Why does this remind me of Hotel California?? Maybe because I can here the bump and grinding tones of Joe Walsh away on the radio downstairs as I write this!! :)) But yes... dust in the desert and tyre tracks right down your back, burnin like rubber... You can check out any time you like but you can never leave... Gotta love that slide/steel gui-tar.... Luvin it... Kate xx
Nice visuals, makes me wanna shake out my towel and ruminate.
nice work!
Jacks ;)
Be safe,
Karen
You even made me sweat with this hot offering!!
Well done my friend!!
Love Tinka
Love,
Eileen
And I know some really hot desert spots, if that's what you really want!