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Our Old Man
by Dale Clark → (All Poetry by Dale Clark)
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Our Old Man

the old man said "Boys gotta be boys"
so we knew that all was well
no matter what kinda hell
we raised... a "Billy"
the old man said "Goats are many"
we knew then the herder was us
as the coyotes waited in the shadows
the old man said "Coyotes are sneaky"
we knew it was a fact
you could hear it in their singing
our dogs would howl back
speaking out "Tread Lightly"

the old man said "Boys, travel the hills"
we knew that one horizon
lead us to another in our journey
so we raised... a "Billy"
we weren't afraid of anything
the old man said "Brave Lads, go forward"
so we knew we would continue
as time dealt her hand
we moved with the wind
sometimes breezing along
often times blown into the fire

the old man said "Men will survive"
so we thought when were we such
we thought we knew so much
we didn't know if life was hard or easy
we came to a cross road
which way to go
the old man said "Boys, go with your heart"
in such a way we became brothers
riding the hard ride, cruising the easy
we didn't know any other way
the old man said "Boys, you rode the hard
and cruised the easy, now you're men"
so we raised ...a "Billy
and he was pleased

(c) Dale Clark

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 Reviews of "Our Old Man"
Reviewed on June 27, 2007
This is excellent Dale, a wonderful tale of how to raise men. I loved this so much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
a real poem about the way boys in particular, grow up-i like it and the honesty in it

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Love the spirit of lore and continuity in this write, Dale, all wrapped in the intergenerational culture and community. A sense of awe, respect and timelessness which gives a personal face to our sorroundings and beds us in, knowing how and where we belong. And why. This weaves a gentle mystery that is both concrete and abstract, justly proud and humble. Somehow links my mind with the indigenous Native Americans as well as the Western ones. You tell tales oh so well. If you did cinema, your opening sequences would always involve a narrated voice-over, setting the scene. Love this. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Our elders can teach us so much - if we but listen. Truly enjoyed this one, Dale.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Excellent writng Dale,well done...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Sweet Angel Cowboy! I adored this awesome write! I also Adore Yore Old Man, he must be so wonderful to know! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Dale this is good..excellent mate..billyboyYOU!!

Love tinky :)

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
This is a good one. It reminded me of my nomadic culture and lifesty;e, where verbal communication is the way of teaching young people specially boys. The old men were a source of wisdom, knowledge and guidance. But here in America, that is no more. The old man's role was taken by the TV!
Thank you for sharing this,

Abdullahi


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