as night fades
into days first dawning
we still hear
voices of ghosts
dead long ago
ancient shadows
whispering into a soft breeze
Wonderful imagery, Dale, those mesas can truly be magical. And you've now inspired me to write a poem about the night I saw Geronomo's ghost out there.
Hey Dale, your title caught my eye,i am working on a tenative title called "Listening to a Shadow Vison" but i wasn't to happy with it and I'm trying a new aproach.
Something about themshadows the living part of them that gets me and I can see you to,anyway ya got the feeling I get. You got it right. Good job.
Soulful and GRAND! :)) Big-Spirited and reverential. Conjures for me the vast scale of size, which usually eludes me, being only used to "small is beautiful" over here. Love that last stanza particularly, Dale. TY Kate xx
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Love Tinky
into days first dawning
we still hear
voices of ghosts
dead long ago
ancient shadows
whispering into a soft breeze
Wonderful imagery, Dale, those mesas can truly be magical. And you've now inspired me to write a poem about the night I saw Geronomo's ghost out there.
Something about themshadows the living part of them that gets me and I can see you to,anyway ya got the feeling I get. You got it right. Good job.
Be safe,
Karen
Soulful and GRAND! :)) Big-Spirited and reverential. Conjures for me the vast scale of size, which usually eludes me, being only used to "small is beautiful" over here. Love that last stanza particularly, Dale. TY Kate xx