FANTASTIC, Dale. I love your cinematic writes, but, d'ya know what... I reckon that this slice of REAL convo that so hooks me in is my all-time favourite. Go figure... perhaps it's just where I'm at today in particular. Very elliptical and dreamy in that intimate way that couples do "natter" about both the deep and inconsequential things in life when it gets to that surreal time of night. Abso brillo. Your fan, Kate xx
Will we know each other there?
Will you love me then?
Quite a thought provoking piece, Dale.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
time and space, ---breathing--- is even irrelevant in the face of raw and pure and real love. .. lifetimes are not ever enough, perhraps we will get more than one? you left the open.ness of that initmate thought ["love you for eternity"] encapsulate the heART of your write, and it left a circular eternal ring of rapture---exquisite write
blessings and wild things to you~
ness
Dale my head is SPINNING i got to go back and reread this one ,concept built unto another all making a picture that for an instant i could see then.........alone....as i sit here alone and think this over,nice write dale,great ending
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
for crossing over
into the surreal
Another dimension
another world
I can relate to the sentiments that you express in these verses, Dale. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis
This poem is a feast of food for thought. To me, it sounds like real and meaningful conversation. The kind I enjoy most.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Love tinky
Will you love me then?
Quite a thought provoking piece, Dale.
blessings and wild things to you~
ness
stan