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Ink Puddle
by Dale Clark → (All Poetry by Dale Clark)
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Ink Puddle

muddled words
dripping from the west
sun setting puddle

poets by and by
poets try and try

muddle in the middle
east of the great divide
piddle in the puddle
of a bloody grave
tombstones cry

desert dunes of sand
bullet holes of oil
flow to the gulf
of turpentine
west of genocide

dance of a foot
soldiers hypnotized
strong armed digitized

muddle in the puddle
of bloody red
bullets fled
while cars
bombed radicals
blow up
east of humility

angels fly
in a pigs eye
Oink! Oink!

middle of the muddle
praying to the sky
bullets fly

waves of bloody ink
shores stained
Why?

poets by and by
poets try and try

drowning in the ink puddle

(c) Dale Clark

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 Reviews of "Ink Puddle"
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
I can see that absurd puddle flowing when we could be going with suns energy. I sure wish they would use the knowledge we have, and dump oils darkness.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
Dale,this is a blistering poem told in a unique way,of how our
culture is tumbling out of control! Brilliant write!

Ciao!
ET

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
WRITE ON! Piggy Ink head/hind quarters says WRITE ON... --Charlie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 23, 2008
waves of bloody ink
shores stained
Why?

Quite a thought provoking piece, my friend.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Srark dark...yet vivid offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
i found this write to be a real stark eye opener as to the power of the written word in the midst of an often messed up world

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Startling and though deeply thought cleverly enjambed. I like it. Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
The words of the poets may sometimes be the only civilized voice in a world gone to the edge of insanity and back.

Fee

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
creative and reiterative powerfuLL ending. ..
and i love the allegorical emssages. ..
ness

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Clearly, I'm in a muddle and see your view on the war. What a muddle it is. Your depiction through your words and imagery convey what all the lies, deceits, and bunch of misunderstandings can do. Bravo. Write on. Liz


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