This is great music! I don't know what your older poems are like, but I feel you've got this new "honed down harmony and rhythm" down pat - it makes me want to just quit writing "grammatical lyrics" - This is the stuff - you're onto it and INTO IT!
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
You painted this one well!!
Love Tinky
stan
excellent Dale...
John
Fee
Cryssa
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.