silver is the night
struggling silent
roaring restful
red and white delight
hazy galactic dust
heavy, glittering
cosmic colossal intent
holding tight
turbulent might
sternly tall
quietly screaming
golden respite
eternal sight
watching, waiting
preserve orbiting blue
planetary night
emotional fright
booming soundless
neither here
nor there
I felt like I was on a dance floor under glittering lights with one huge blue light like the moon shining down cosmically caressing and romancing me,while preserving mother earth...
"Preserve orbiting blue" ! Wow this lovely lilting verse ought to become the theme song for those who know that "ecology is life" here on this Big Blue Ball. This has such a nice rhythm - and you've been writing a lot of great stuff lately - I'll have to go back and read more...
keep writing! michael
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Great writing sweetie,have a wonderful evening,Hugsssss
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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keep writing! michael
Be always safe,
Karen
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Have shared a few Spirit Musings "10 word" poems again!!
"Larks Ascent and The Power Of Nature”
Love Tinky