silent being (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 31, 2009

I really like the ending - wearied wisely, weathered and worn, but innocently enlightened. Carry On, my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 31, 2009

i enjoyed the format here-nice write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

deeply reflective & well written, Dale ...

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

Tremendous poetry from a different plane. Very nice.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

This is soul-searching and introspective. The points of introspection, the various points to ponder, brood over self, and self-correct, reflect, and grow. Our world begins within ourselves, and how we approach, observe, feel, and then reflect. That way an endless recursive process. It is not often that the effect of recursion affect everybody in the same way, but as a personal experience it is the way we evolve and grow.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

and in the quietude of silence....we can find "silent being" whispering many emotive thoughts-in the darkest moments clarity can shine through...
peace & blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

AHHH...BUT THERE IS ONE THAT HEARS, AND SEES, AND KNOWS...EVERY SILENT SCREAM. I LOVED THIS WRITE WITH PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT TOUCHES AND PROVOKES. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

I can feel this deeply, Dale. Yours is not a naturally sorrowing spirit, I don't think; so this reflective, melancholy state conjurs a dark, cell-like space within which you are seeking a chink of light to lighten your onward path and a safe place in order to sort the wheat from the chaff in your heart and mind. The search for inner truth and integrity can be harsh and self-flagellating at times, but never without its bountiful rewards as we stive toward inner peace and harmony. Strikes a chord with me, that's for sure! :)) xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

We are on the same metaphysical plane today, Dale, but I have other mysteries to solve and you are content to ride within your calm and serene twilight. Nicely done as always, hope all is well in your Universe.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Kenneth Seay

Reviewed on August 30, 2009

A noted older way of saying it.

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