... a lovely piece of work. for the sake of clarity you might consider naming the elements here: once is enough. 'you', 'she', 'you she you'. is a little vague for a first read; and in most cases, that is all a poem gets.
Wonderful CJ. The Muse , at times, is the silent listener of broken spells, passions and hearts. The Muse speaks to us and only few listen. Your hearing is acute.
Love,peace and harmony,
Susan
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2003
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Romantic muse and you are
an excellent Author.
"she rotated and consummated you
you pivoted upon your axis
she grasped your radiance
you revolved around her silence
and reveled in her bliss"
SIGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
Was but a moment there.
Peggy
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Love,peace and harmony,
Susan
Romantic muse and you are
an excellent Author.
"she rotated and consummated you
you pivoted upon your axis
she grasped your radiance
you revolved around her silence
and reveled in her bliss"
SIGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
Was but a moment there.
Peggy