O Youth! (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

CJ Dale, O Youth is a pulsating write with excellent message and exquisite delivery this was high in ranking I applaud you over and over this is going to my library right this minute

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

we are ageless in discovery... very effective write...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

La Belle-I'm young, really I am, this was just ponderance. lol You're as old as you
think you are. I don't think too much. ;)
-Dale

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

Dale,
Great piece!! I was just talking to an old friend of mine over the weekend, and we were doing the "remember whens" and it suddenly dawned on me that they were almost twenty years ago! What a reality check! lol!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 16, 2003

This is one of ure best write...perfect!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

I could see the double meaning here of youth leaving us, both by way of us aging and when our children leave to go off on their own. Excellent write

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

If you're old, never admit it!! Great poem.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

But inside you are still young...never lose that sweetness,write it out .

This poem made me sad but liked it very much...well written!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This is excellent, Dale.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Hi Sweets,

I thought that you were talking about me. ;) Seriously, this is good and I feel it.

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This is wonderful Dale.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

Love it. I firmly believe YOUTH is wasted on the YOUNG. [smiles]

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

I love the flow and the metaphors in this one. Good write indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

"Tis true, she loves us and leaves us but the memories are oh so grande!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

This was outstanding, I loved these lines:

O Youth!
O Lovely, Lovely Youth!
I beseech you to stay.
You come now only in my dreams.
You�re so still, so sweet until I awake.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

CJ!!
O Youth!
O Sweet
Bitter youth!
O How I�d loved you!
I am old so quickly
I am wrinkled and alone!
Now
You�ve left me
For another

Damn did you have to remind me!!!!

But you did a great job on this one!!

Fine job...Okay!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2003

CJ,
Awesome piece.
"O Youth!
O Lovely, Lovely Youth!
I beseech you to stay.
You come now only in my dreams.
You�re so still, so sweet until I awake. "
Peggy