Shattered Dreams (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Very emotional and intense. the imagery is fantastic

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

How very romantic. I like!
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Dale you bring out wonderful emotion here. I love it!
*Marlene*

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

A powerful write! Well penned.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 10, 2003

Dale...this is profound....powerful and deep write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Lovely work, Dale. Bravo.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Hi Dale,
Oh this is so deeply
heartfelt...

Beautiful...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Outstanding! This is now my most very fav of yours

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

(((cj)))

multi-sensual, multi-layered perfection, this write

*BRAVO*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Yes dreams of love mixed with passion and betrayal and uncertainity... this one moved my tear buds into crying again!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

What a great poem of imagery and expression! Love, doubt and hope all present! Flows nicely!

Reviewed by Marley Jensen (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

"Your shattered dreams
came true in pieces..." Excellent selection of words to open this beautiful verse.

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Fluid and smooth. As warm and cosy feeling, and secure, as a winter day sitting near a hearth. Your heart opens in warmth and hope, and so your poetry expresses as much and more. Good writing, Dale!

*:.Brittany Renee.:*

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Your imagery is magnificent in this piece! Stirs all the senses!

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

just wonderful..Florean

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Dale.... I love how you are a sucker for kisses. :) Your images are so fine. One would be a fool to not return. May your poet heart run on forever!

Thank you,
Emilie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

So many feelings in this one, so heartfelt emotions.

Well-done, CJ!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Dreams of love mixed with passion and betrayal and uncertainity. So many things here well expressed Dale. Bill Murray