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Free Fall
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The dark night covers me
in my lowest depths
no clouds to rest my head
no stars to wink at me

The abyss I look into
is dark and deep
The void is endless
now I fall, free fall

The shadows whisper low
darting to and fro
no moon to tell secrets
no sunlight to grow

My soul has leapt off
the cliff I stand on
one step I take is shaky
one more I fall, free fall

Stumbling I try and hold on
The light has left me
I weep translucent tears
no one can hear or see

They fill the oceans depths
where reflections are false
The dark night is silent
it approaches stealthily

The abyss that surrounds me
in my lowest depths
is dark and deep
now I fall, free fall

© 2003 CJ Clark
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 Reviews of "Free Fall"
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Nice free falling.....aaaah Splendid
*Marlene*

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
excellent visuals...

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
Outstanding poetry, Dale.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
This is superb work Dale!!!!
Loved the imagery, the free fall verses...most haunting and captivating write indeed!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 31, 2003
It's like diving from a cliff into the ocean...the most powerful awesome feeling!!Have you ever done that?
It's just awesome!!
But then I must say I survived it....and I did it again...and I am still around...to give my dear husband a pain...lol!!
I get this "freefall" every night before I fall asleep...I just let my body go with the flow...and by the time my head hits something.."BAD" I'm fast asleep!!
And dream poetry dreams...hehehehe!!

Just love your poetry...and your nice comments ;) !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Hudson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
This is very powerful, your conveyance of Mood setting words well delivered.
sincerely, Michelle

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Visual and Captiving !

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Vivdly expressed with dynamic motion, love the concept Dale.creative poetry!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Excellent free fall verses...
LM

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
Vivid is the movement of the soul.

~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 30, 2003
So beautifully dark, excellently written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
CJ,
Excellent imagery and illusions
"They fill the oceans depths
where reflections are false
The dark night is silent
it approaches stealthily

The abyss that surrounds me
in my lowest depths
is dark and deep
now I fall, free fall "
Lady Peg


Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
This is very good! I liked it.
- J -


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