Return to Me (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2003

Beautiful longing, passion and love. Isn't it the basis of everything? A true foundation to anything is love with lots of faith of course That man up there has something to do with it I think ;) This is amazing work you have spun. I am truly awed here! You just take passion and make a new meaning for it with these words! Absolute perfection! Excellent work Dale!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Dale...powerful and write of longings....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 6, 2003

Dale, this has a strong, intense emotional pull to it...wonderfully done

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2003

..oh I wish for her to return to you..I pray that she does...
This is such a heart wrenching write...beautiful in its longing..
Wondrous..indeed.
Vesna

Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Hearfelt write and display of emotions is beautiful!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 4, 2003

Tinka-That's beautiful and it does go
with this one. You have a loving heart.
TY for the friendship.
Love~Dale

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

This connects so beautiful with these words of my poem 'Only a moment..so this will be my review to you Dale!!
If only for a moment...
Consider my feeling
If only for a moment...
My tears could speak
If only for a moment...
Listen to your heart
If only for a moment...
Look through my eyes
If only for a moment...
Close your eyes and feel my hurt
If only for a moment...
Let your spirit free
If only for a moment...
Unlock your heart and give me the key
If only for a moment...
Feel my warm embrace
If only for a moment...
Know I will love you forever
If only for a moment...
Take action and rescue me
If only for a moment...
Be with me
Forever!!
My
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Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

Really lovely..and so captivating...
Jenni

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

Yes, as Amor says - the eyes, the windows to the soul - lovely poem :0)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

The eyes have it...this much I know. There is so much beauty in such a romantic write as this.
Amor

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on October 3, 2003

beautiful..Floreann