Burning (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

I can see the flames. Great

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 16, 2003

Such depth to this and as always the imagery is powerful
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Absolutely excellent Dale, I loved this one!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Powerful write!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Revelations sounds like this to me, Dale. A spooky write so well done.
Amor

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

This chilled me to the bone, such incredible imagery.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

You amaze me to no end Dale. Absolutely fantastic work again! Ok, now please give me my breath back! ;)

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Whoa, this is apocalyptic. After the burning, there may be pure gold.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

apocalyptic images powerfully expressed!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

You wrote a masterful account of The End...
I expect it will be like this.
First rate poetry!

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Powerful & very excellent!

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

This is a hot one in all regards...I like your dark side Dale

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Astounding! This reminds me so much of the images formed in my mind during the 50's when everyone was building bomb shelters. Our family was too poor to do so and I had such dreams of 'burning'. Terrific write!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

CJ,
Your always a favorite of mine
your imagery and verses of life
they are always so stunning
"The fire burns fast & hot
lights the sky in the sun
The flames jump
burning blood red hearts
burning, burning, burning

The fire explodes
blinding the moon & stars
The tears
fall like rain
drying the fiery sky "
Lady peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

This is so beautifully done Dale!!
Very vivid imagery in this one!!

You Rock man....right?

Love Tinky

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Very apocalyptic Dale, a chilling write amongst all that heat!Beautifully done!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Quite a dramatic write Dale, and I'd say profound in quite a few places, Al

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

This is quite a 'burning' write Dale! Warmed things right up. Great visuals this presented. Lisa