medicated memories
prescribed tranquility
left alone
discolored swirls
hallucinated dreams
persecuted souls
hollowed inside out
liver dysfunction
lubricated musings
diseased mind
hide in crowds
without love
without passion
huddled conferences
profound thoughts
prescribed dreams
confronting shrinks
minds minisculed
power taken
visions inflated
medicated poetry
beating heart
fractured soul
death awaits
masked deformities
diseased mentalities
veiled dreams
prescribed little pills
"hide in crowds
without love
without passion
huddled conferences" ---- YAOWZA! Can you dig any deeper! This cries!
Feeling is illegal these days! And the prescribed dreams and medicated poetry part! There is not one line that I became bored with. Amazing damning you do so cleanly here Dale. Fine work.
Why in this society do doctors always want us to take pills for everything? You sad for more than a day or two? Take a pill. Are you shy and uncomfortable around crowds? Take a pill. Can't do public speaking? Well, we have a pill for that too. My gosh, aren't we allowed to just FEEL anymore? Great write!
~Kerry
PS Sorry for the rant...I suppose there's a pill for that too! LOL
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
without love
without passion
This caught in my throat as I was reading...ty
Vesna
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Dale...what an exceptional expression of pill taking...everytime I go for a checkup...first thing I say to the doc..." dont give me any new medications because I wont take them" LOL...you just described all the feelings in this one...great write...floria
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without love
without passion
huddled conferences" ---- YAOWZA! Can you dig any deeper! This cries!
Feeling is illegal these days! And the prescribed dreams and medicated poetry part! There is not one line that I became bored with. Amazing damning you do so cleanly here Dale. Fine work.
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
~Kerry
PS Sorry for the rant...I suppose there's a pill for that too! LOL
without passion
This caught in my throat as I was reading...ty
Vesna
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